campaign: Minor improvements to text.
authorNeal H. Walfield <neal@gnu.org>
Mon, 15 May 2017 13:23:46 +0000 (15:23 +0200)
committerNeal H. Walfield <neal@gnu.org>
Mon, 15 May 2017 13:23:46 +0000 (15:23 +0200)
web/donate/index.org

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             <p>To continue supporting and improving GnuPG, we, the
               main GnuPG developers, are soliciting donations from the
               general public.  Our <strong>primary goal</strong> is to
-              raise <strong>15&#x202f;000 euros per month</strong> to fully
-              fund 3 developers; our <strong>stretch goal</strong> is
-              twice that, <strong>30&#x202f;000</strong> euros per month.</p>
+              raise <strong>15&#x202f;000 euros per month</strong> to
+              fully fund 3 developers; our <strong>stretch
+              goal</strong> is twice that, <strong>30&#x202f;000 euros
+              per month</strong>.</p>
             <p>Please consider donating to ensure that this critical
               piece of software continues to work for everyone.</p>
          </div>
          <p class="text-justify">
            <strong><a
 href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
-            >For 20 years</a>, GnuPG has helped protect online
+            >For the past 20 years</a>, GnuPG has helped protect online
            communication.</strong>
            <a href="https://www.eff.org/de/about/staff/cindy-cohn">Cindy
            Cohn<img src="/share/campaign/img/headshots/cindy-cohn.jpg"
@@ -242,7 +243,7 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
            to <a href="https://www.enigmail.net/index.php/en/">Enigmail</a>,
            and
            supported <a href="https://www.fsij.org/category/gnuk.html">the
-           GnuK project</a>&mdash;a free source and free hardware
+           Gnuk project</a>&mdash;a free source and free hardware
            security token.
          <p class="text-justify">
            <strong>We want to continue this work in the long
@@ -251,8 +252,7 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
             This means making sure that a majority of our funding
             comes from individual donors, and not corporations.
             Further, to ensure long-term stability, our focus is on
-            recurring donations and not one-time donations, like last
-            time.
+            recurring donations and not one-time donations.
          <p class="text-justify">
            <strong>Our primary goal is to get donation commitments
              for 15&#x202f;000&nbsp;euros per month&mdash;enough to
@@ -260,31 +260,33 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
              just 2000&nbsp;people donate 5 or 10 euros each month,
              the equivalent of just 2 or 3 cups of coffee.
          <p class="text-justify">
-           <div class="pull-right" style="width: 40%;">
+           <div class="pull-right" style="width: 40%; margin: 1em">
               <img src="/share/campaign/img/gnuk.jpg" id="camp-gnuk">
-              <p id="camp-caption-gnuk" class="text-center">The GnuK Token</p>
+              <p id="camp-caption-gnuk" class="text-center">The Gnuk Token</p>
            </div>
            This money will firstly allow us to continue our
            maintenance of GnuPG.  It will also be used to fund our
-           work on the GnuK security token.  One new project that it
-           will enable is a book called "An Advanced Introduction to
-           GnuPG," which has three principle audiences: developers
-           who want to integrate GnuPG into their programs, and need
-           to understand the various concepts, the important security
-           tradeoffs, and common pitfalls; digital security trainers
-           who need to understand GnuPG to be able to make sound
-           recommendations to users; and, of course, enthusiasts.
+           work on the Gnuk security token.  And, one new project
+           that it will support is a book called "An Advanced
+           Introduction to GnuPG."  A book for developers who want to
+           integrate GnuPG into their programs, and need to
+           understand the various concepts, the important security
+           tradeoffs, and common pitfalls; for digital security
+           trainers who need to understand GnuPG to be able to make
+           sound recommendations to users; and, of course,
+           for for enthusiasts.
          <p class="text-justify">
            <strong>Our stretch goal is to double this number of
            donations</strong>.  If 4000&nbsp;people donate just 5 or
            10 Euros each month, then we will continue to grow the
            team, and dedicate them to helping other projects in the
            GnuPG ecosystem.  One project that we really want to
-           contribute to is GPG Tools, which many activists and
-           journalists rely on to secure their online communication.
-           We want to make sure that GPG integration in Apple's
-           mailer is supported as soon as a new version of macOS is
-           released.
+           contribute to
+           is <a href="https://gpgtools.org/">GPGTools</a>, which
+           many activists and journalists rely on to secure their
+           online communication.  We want to make sure that GPG
+           integration in Apple's mailer is supported as soon as a
+           new version of macOS is released.
          <p class="text-justify">
            Now, maybe you don't use GnuPG to encrypt your email.
            Nevertheless, some journalists whose work you value rely
@@ -324,10 +326,11 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
              </div>
              <div class="col-xs-12 col-sm-6">
                <div class="goal goal-3">
-                 <h3><img src="/share/campaign/img/token.svg" style="height: 1em; vertical-align: baseline;" aria-hidden="true"/> GnuK</h3>
-                 <p>The GnuK is a fully free software and open
-                   schematic security token developed by Niibe.  We
-                   plan to invest more in its production and
+                 <h3><img src="/share/campaign/img/token.svg" style="height: 1em; vertical-align: baseline;" aria-hidden="true"/>Gnuk</h3>
+                 <p>The <a href="https://www.fsij.org/category/gnuk.html">Gnuk</a>
+                   is a fully free software and open schematic
+                   security token developed by Niibe.  We want to
+                   invest more in its production and
                    distribution.</p>
                </div>
              </div>
@@ -336,13 +339,14 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
              <div class="col-xs-12 col-sm-6">
                <div class="goal goal-2">
                  <h3><span class="glyphicon glyphicon-book" aria-hidden="true"></span> Book</h3>
-                 <p>We want to improve documentation.  In particular,
-                   we are working on a book called <i>An Advanced
-                   Introduction to GnuPG</i>, which will explain how
-                   GnuPG works as well as best practices.  It is
-                   targetted towards digital security trainers,
-                   programmers integrating GnuPG to their
-                   applications, and enthusiasts.</p>
+                 <p>We want to improve documentation.  On major
+                    project in this area is a book that we have
+                    started to write called <i>An Advanced
+                    Introduction to GnuPG</i>, which will explain how
+                    GnuPG works as well as best practices.  It is
+                    targetted towards digital security trainers,
+                    programmers integrating GnuPG to their
+                    applications, and enthusiasts.</p>
                </div>
              </div>
              <div class="col-xs-12 col-sm-6">
@@ -352,9 +356,9 @@ href="https://lists.gnupg.org/pipermail/gnupg-devel/1997-December/014131.html"
                    interact with it via some tool.  We hope to better
                    help these tool developers improve GnuPG
                    integration.  In particular, we want to make sure
-                   that GPG Tools, the GPG plug-in for Apple's
-                   mailer, works as soon as a new version of
-                   macOS is released.</p>
+                   that <a href="https://gpgtools.org/">GPGTools</a>,
+                   the GnuPG plug-in for Apple's mailer, works as
+                   soon as a new version of macOS is released.</p>
                </div>
              </div>
            </div>